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Card 1.

Sora, Keyblade Master
1UWR Mythic Rare
Planeswalker

+2: Put a 1/1 uwr sidekick token onto the battlefield
0: All sidekicks gain haste, flying and double strike.
-8: Gain an Emblem which reads: All creatures you control are sidekicks in addition to their normal types.

(3)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sora_(Kingdom_Hearts)

- Picture: Sora, with the keyblade on his shoulder and small beings surrounding him.

Card 2.

Terraformer
3 Uncommon
Artifact - Equipment

Equip 1: Equip Terraformer to a land you control. At the beginning of your upkeep, if Terraformer is equipped to a land, that land may become a basic land type of your choice. If Terraformer would leave the battlefield and was equipped, destroy the equipped land.

The mountains and trees of today make way for a better tomorrow.

- Picture: a large, heavy duty machine that is sucking up the trees on one side of the card, and spitting out water on the other.

Card 3.

Bloodthirsty Cavalier
1R Rare
Creature - Knight

Haste, First Strike

If Bloodthirsty Cavalier would damage an opponent, that player loses half their life, rounded down instead and Bloodthirsty Cavalier gains a +1/+1 counter.

Once he smells your blood he never stops. Ever.

2/1

- Picture: A knight in blood-spattered armor on a horse with a lance going through a guy and into a wall, as though he ran the guy through and then pinned him to the wall.

Thanks,
Jazaray

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Forgot the colors for the tokens and I needed to fix an ability.

Thanks,
Jazaray

__________________
A Plastered Dragon Original Limerick:
There was a nice lassie named Jaz
Many wished to have what she has,
A delicate face,
A soft warm embrace,
And a whole lot of bedroom pizzazz.

WeedIan: Jazaray is like MOTL's Mom.

Thanks,
Jazaray

__________________
A Plastered Dragon Original Limerick:
There was a nice lassie named Jaz
Many wished to have what she has,
A delicate face,
A soft warm embrace,
And a whole lot of bedroom pizzazz.

WeedIan: Jazaray is like MOTL's Mom.

(I was short on good ideas from Sci-fi so I went with Urza. I modeled him after mainly blue abilities, his last ability is modeled after his rage but wasn't enough to make him include red in the cost.
His only + ability requires him to "take apart" artifacts. It gives you a card as the "knowledge" he gains from deconstructing the artifact. His -1 is obviously tinker, I feel it still requires the sacrifice of an artifact or it'd be too good.
The -4 ability is effectively him constructing armor for you, and it's actually a pretty powerful ability in multiples. His -10 requires his own sacrifice into his own rage, and as such is pretty much a kicked Urza's rage.)

Voodoo Dust 3 Unc
At the beginning of your upkeep remove a ju-ju counter from Voodoo Dust. When the last ju-ju counter is removed from Voodoo Dust exile it.
2 : Hex target player, place 4 ju-ju counters on Voodoo Dust and it loses this ability. (Attach to target player Hexing them. Whenever a Hexed player casts a spell they must pay 1 or that spell is exiled.
Any time a creature enters the battlefield under control of a Hexed player that creature enters the battlefield tapped.)

(The taxing effect of having a voodoo curse can play havoc on your magical abilities. Tiring you out, I worded the ability similar to Frost Titan. I did this because one time I let someone get full value by tapping out for a removal spell and neglecting the extra costs, and I lost the spell because of it.)

Keldon Blademaster R1 Rare
Creature - Human Barbarian
First Strike
Keldon Blademaster cannot be blocked except by 2 or more creatures.
Shroud
R: Keldon Blademaster gets +2/+0 until end of turn.
"Well sure, I suppose you could try and hit them with a spell. Just be careful of their blades when you're waving your fingers about" - Teferi, Mage of Zhalfir
2/3

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Originally posted by : B14ckM4g3
Just throwing this out there:
Entries are due by Wednesday!

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I thought they were due tonight?

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Entries are due by Sunday, May 26 midnight!

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http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Unicron

Card 2:
Hall of the Obzedat
2 (R)
Artifact-Fortification
Fortified land has "WB, T, Sacrifice a
creature: Target creature gains deathtouch
and lifelink until end of turn".
Fortify-3

Card 3:
Masochism Demon
BR (R)
Creature-Demon
Haste
When Masochism Demon enters the
battlefield, sacrifice it unless you pay 4 life.
When Masochism Demon dies it deals 4
damage to target creature or player, and
2 damage to you.
4/4
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fluffycow:
Card 1:
Ruby Weapon (Mythic)
9RRRRR
Legendary Creature – Weapon

If this would enter play from a zone other than its owner’s hand, shuffle it into its owner’s library instead

If a spell or ability would have an effect on ~ other than damage or detain, ignore those parts of the spell or ability

All source of damage gains wither

Half all damage that would be dealt to ~ (round down)

X: ~ deals x damage to target creature or player, remove X -1/-1 counters from ~ for each damage dealt this way

3: tap target lands

0: Exile a creature of an opponent controls at random. Activate this ability only if there are more than 2 creatures that you don’t control

“What’s that red thing in the middle of the desert? Let’s go poke it Desert-Walking Choco!”
-Tombstone of a curious Cloud

18/18

Card 2:
Forever Essence
5 (Mythic )
Artifact - Bond

~ can only be bonded to a non-creature, non- land permanent

Spells that share a card type with the bonded permanent can be cast from your graveyard

Bond – 5 (attach ~ to non-creature, non- land permanent). This can only be done as a sorcery

I didn’t want to do anything too crazy for this

Card 3:

Citizen of All Realms
2 (Mythic)
Artifact Creature – Beast

Sunburst 2

Remove two +1/+1 counters from ~: Gain 3 life, ~ deals 2 damage to target creature, return target creature card from your graveyard to your hand, put a 1/2 Spider token with reach into play or draw a card.

2: return ~ to its owner’s hand

0/1

He does things and then does them again
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AetherStorm
He-Man, Master of the Multiverse
2RW - Mythic
Planeswalker

Flash
When ~ comes into play, you can’t lose the game this turn. All damage and/or life loss that would reduce your life total to less than 1, reduces it to 1 instead.

+1: Destroy target non-basic land. That land’s controller may search his/her library for a basic land card and put it into play.
+1: Put a red and green 3/2 cat creature token named Battlecat with first strike and haste into play.
-X: ~ deals X damage to target creature or player and you gain that much life.
-X: ~ destroy target artifact or enchantment with casting cost equal to X. Its controller loses X life.

4

Stripped from his weaker half, he roams the planes of the Multiverse confirming his motto on each one: He HAS the power.

Bucket of Grease
2 – Uncommon
Artifact – Equipment

~ can only be attached to a non-creature artifact.
Equipped artifact gains “Whenever this is tapped for the first time this turn, untap it”.

Equip 1
Smelt 2. (During your main phase, you may sacrifice ~. If you do, add 2 to your mana pool.)

“Nothing like a blob of the ol’ smudge to get me gears crankin’” Phyrexian Dreadnaught, quote.

Verduran Empath
GW – Rare
Creature – Human Druid

At the beginning of your upkeep, you may search your library for an enchantment card with converted mana cost X or less, where X is the number of lands you control, reveal it and put it into your hand.
You may play an additional land each turn, as long as it is a Forest or Plains.

”Singing hymns in ancient languages, she serves both the land as well as the magic it brings forth”

2/2
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iplaneswalk
card 1
http://www.en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bruce_Wayne

Bruce Wayne, Gotham's Hero

Planeswalker Mythic

CMC: BBB3

Loyalty: 3 (After all, He is only human)

+1 Detain target permanent until the upkeep after your next.

-3 You gain life equal to the number of permanents on the battlefield.

-10 target opponent concedes the game.

xxxxxx

Card 2

Venser's Helmet

Artifact-Equipment Mythic

CMC 3

Equip Yourself - v (untap symbol) target creature you control.

Equiped player has hexproof. Equip only as a sorcery.

because protecting his face wasn't versatile enough.

xxxxxx

Card 3

Endangered Roc of Paradise

Creature - Bird
CMC: GB
P/T: 2/3

Endangered Roc of paradise gets +1/-1 for each human your opponents control.

t (tap symbol): add 1 mana of any color to your mana pool.
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ryan2754

1. Myrrah, Queen of the Locusts

4BR – Mythic Rare

Legendary Creature – Human Wizard

1BR: Put a lambent counter on target creature.

Whenever a creature with a lambent counter blocks or becomes blocked by a creature, it deals 2 damage to that creature and 1 damage to it’s controller.

2BR: Put a 2/2 red and black Locust Drone token onto the battlefield.

4/3

"They do not understand. They do not know why we wage this war. Why we cannot stop. Will not stop. Why we will fight and fight and fight. Until we win... Or we die. And we are not dead yet."

2. Titan Engine

4 - Rare

Artifact - Accoutrements

WUBRG: Add 5 Loyalty Counters to accoutered planeswalker. Activate this ability only as a sorcery and only once each turn.

6: Add WUBRG to your mana pool.

Accouter – 3 (2: Attach to target planeswalker you control. Accouter only as a sorcery. This card comes into play unattached and stays in play if the planeswalker leaves play.)

3. Scroll Torcher

RR – Rare

Creature – Goblin Wizard

At the beginning of your upkeep, name a card, then reveal a card from your hand. If it is the named card, Scroll Torcher deals 2 damage to target creature or player.

2/1
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Coolcat3000
Card 1

Master Wayne, the Owlman
2UB Mythic Rare
Legendary creature - Bird Human

Protection from bats

Whenever Master Wayne, the Owlman enters the battlefield gain control of target creature an opponent controls until end of turn. Untap that creature. It gains haste until end of turn.

Whenever Master Wayne, the Owlman attacks target opponent discards a card.

"Mind controlled by Madness"

3/4

Card 2

Statue of Augury
2 Common
Artifact Equipment

[2] Equip to target non-basic land.
Equipped land or artifact is indestructible
Equipped land may pay [2] to Scry 1.

(To scry 1, look at the top three cards of your library, then put any number of them on the bottom of your library and the rest on top in any order.)

"The power of hindsight is a wonderful thing."

Card 3

Scribe Goblin
1R Rare
Creature - Goblin Shaman

[tap] Draw a card, then discard a card.
Whenever you discard a card have Scribe goblin deal 2 damage to target creature or player.

"The Goblin Shaman sometimes has to make unlawful sacrifice to better the tribe"- Squee, Goblin Nabob

1/2
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KGthelegend
Card 1
Light Yagami
3WU - Mythic
Planeswalker - Light

+1: Creatures you control gain Vigilance until end of turn.
0: Scry 2
-3: Destroy target creature, transform Light Yagami.
[4]
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Kira
Color Identity: Black
Planeswalker - Light

+1: Destroy target creature.
0: Transform Kira.
-8: Pay half your life rounded up, search your library for 3 cards and put them into your hand. Then shuffle your library.
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Harmonic Replicator
4 - Rare
Artifact - Augment

Augment(attach this card to an enchantment for it's Augment cost): 3

Augmented enchantment has, X: Put a copy of this enchantment in to play, you may choose new targets for the copy. X is the mana cost of the augmented enchantment, including colored mana costs.
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Paragon of Light
WW - Mythic
Creature - Human Knight

First Strike, Vigilance, Indestructible

W: All creatures you control gain +0/+1 until end of turn.
WW: All creatures you control gain +1/+0 until end of turn.

"Stand and fight with me and we shall prevail against impossible odds."

2/2
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Jazaray

Card 1.

Sora, Keyblade Master
1UWR Mythic Rare
Planeswalker

+2: Put a 1/1 sidekick token onto the battlefield
0: Target sidekick gains flying, double strike and haste until end of turn. You may activate this ability once for each sidekick you control.
-8: Gain an Emblem which reads: All creatures you control are sidekicks in addition to their normal types.

(3)

Terraformer
3 Uncommon
Artifact - Equipment

Equip 1: Equip Terraformer to a land you control. At the beginning of your upkeep, if Terraformer is equipped to a land, that land may become a basic land type of your choice. If Terraformer would leave the battlefield and was equipped, destroy the equipped land.

The mountains and trees of today make way for a better tomorrow.

Bloodthirsty Cavalier
1R Rare
Creature - Knight

Haste, First Strike

If Bloodthirsty Cavalier would damage an opponent, that player loses half their life, rounded down instead and Bloodthirsty Cavalier gains a +1/+1 counter.

Once he smells your blood he never stops. Ever.

2/1
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Junichi

Card 1.)
Dr. Bruce Banner
2UG (Mythic)
Planeswalker - Bruce Banner
When Dr. Bruce Banner has one loyalty counter on him, transform him.

+1 Draw a card.
-1 Deals 1 damage to target creature or player.

Loyalty: 3

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The Incredible Hulk
Planeswalker - Bruce Banner/Hulk

+3 Destroy target permanent you control and target permanent you don't control.
+0 Until end of turn, The Incredible Hulk becomes an 8/8 indestructible Human creature with trample. He's still a planeswalker. Prevent all damage that would be dealt to him this turn.
-9 Destroy all other permanents. Transform The Incredible Hulk.

Card 2.)
Metallic-Adaptation
1 (Rare)
Artifact
Enhancement 3 (1: Attach to target artifact you control. You may only play this ability as a sorcery.)

Enhanced artifact's activated abilities cost 2 less to activate. This effect can't reduce the amount of mana an ability costs to activate to less than one mana. If enhanced artifact would be destroyed, destroy Metallic-Adaptation instead.

Nevinyrral's Reminiscence
2 (Rare)

Artifact Creature - Construct
X Tap: Destroy each nonland permanent with converted mana cost X or less.

2/1
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ChargingRhinos

Urza, Chief Artificer UU3 Mythic
+5: Exile an artifact you control Draw 1 card
-1: Sacrifice an artifact you control to search your library for an artifact, reveal it and put it into your hand.
-4: You get an Emblem with "Whenever a source would deal damage to you reduce that damage by 1"
-10: Deals 10 damage to target player or creature, this damage cannot be prevented or redirected, then sacrifice Urza, Chief Artificer
3

Voodoo Dust 3 Unc
At the beginning of your upkeep remove a ju-ju counter from Voodoo Dust. When the last ju-ju counter is removed from Voodoo Dust exile it.
2 : Hex target player, place 4 ju-ju counters on Voodoo Dust and it loses this ability. (Attach to target player Hexing them. Whenever a Hexed player casts a spell they must pay 1 or that spell is exiled.
Any time a creature enters the battlefield under control of a Hexed player that creature enters the battlefield tapped.)

Keldon Blademaster R1 Rare
Creature - Human Barbarian
First Strike
Keldon Blademaster cannot be blocked except by 2 or more creatures.
Shroud
R: Keldon Blademaster gets +2/+0 until end of turn.
"Well sure, I suppose you could try and hit them with a spell. Just be careful of their blades when you're waving your fingers about" - Teferi, Mage of Zhalfir
2/3
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The cards should be:

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Originally posted by Jazaray:
Card 1.

Sora, Keyblade Master
1UWR Mythic Rare
Planeswalker

+2: Put a 1/1 uwr sidekick token onto the battlefield
0: All sidekicks gain haste, flying and double strike.
-8: Gain an Emblem which reads: All creatures you control are sidekicks in addition to their normal types.

(3)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sora_(Kingdom_Hearts)

- Picture: Sora, with the keyblade on his shoulder and small beings surrounding him.

Card 2.

Terraformer
3 Uncommon
Artifact - Equipment

Equip 1: Equip Terraformer to a land you control. At the beginning of your upkeep, if Terraformer is equipped to a land, that land may become a basic land type of your choice. If Terraformer would leave the battlefield and was equipped, destroy the equipped land.

The mountains and trees of today make way for a better tomorrow.

- Picture: a large, heavy duty machine that is sucking up the trees on one side of the card, and spitting out water on the other.

Card 3.

Bloodthirsty Cavalier
1R Rare
Creature - Human Knight

Haste, First Strike

If Bloodthirsty Cavalier would damage an opponent, that player loses half their life, rounded down instead and Bloodthirsty Cavalier gains a +1/+1 counter.

Once he smells your blood he never stops. Ever.

2/1

- Picture: A knight in blood-spattered armor on a horse with a lance going through a guy and into a wall, as though he ran the guy through and then pinned him to the wall.

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I could understand if you don't want to accept the "human" part, as I think you said only 1 edit per entry, and I did two though..

Thanks,
Jazaray

__________________
A Plastered Dragon Original Limerick:
There was a nice lassie named Jaz
Many wished to have what she has,
A delicate face,
A soft warm embrace,
And a whole lot of bedroom pizzazz.

WeedIan: Jazaray is like MOTL's Mom.

Unicron: Overall, I wasn't particularly impressed by Unicron. I get why you gave him his abilities, but what i don't understand are: His mana cost (why not colorless?), why would I play him (he does like to bribe people with power), and how does he win me the game? I think this could of been done better to fit Unicron, as a devourer of the multiverse, as a badass.
5/10

Hall of Obzedat: Simple fortification equipment. Nothing overly spectacular, but I could see this being a real card.
6/10

Masochism Demon: Not bad. Not overly broken, playable, fair downside. Good job.
7/10
18/30
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fluffycow

Ruby Weapon: What a wall of text. However, I have played this game and I am familiar with Ruby Weapon. It is a badass with wayyyy to many abilities, so this is fitting. I'm glad that you made the mana cost 13, as this should not be a card that easily sees play. I think that the 'half damage' part is entirely unneccessary as an 18/18. I know he's a pain to kill, but 18/18 is still brutal. Also, the 'exile' effect should only be able to be used once. Nice flavor text.
7/10

Forever Essence: Nice take. I like how it is neither equipment done before, and how it intereacts. Only being able to use it for planeswalkers artifacts and enchantmnts narrows it well.
7/10

Citizen of All Realms: I like it. A different approach than the other entries, but very versatile. As it's all colorless mana, and the effects all vary with the color pie, I think you did a good job.
8/10
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*this is where I was falling asleep at my keyboard. I'm sorry, I put in as much effort as I could but I'm tired. I'll make another attempt tonight after I finish work and a 4-5 hour drive to my sisters. I've just been very busy this week and I apologize.

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Originally posted by B14ckM4g3:
*this is where I was falling asleep at my keyboard. I'm sorry, I put in as much effort as I could but I'm tired. I'll make another attempt tonight after I finish work and a 4-5 hour drive to my sisters. I've just been very busy this week and I apologize.

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He-Man: I enjoyed reading this. The flash of he-man seems very fitting, as does the angel's grace along with it. Nice addition. I think the abilities are fairly fitting, but I do not like that he has so much text. For a planeswalker, he sure does alot. I'm not so fond of Planeswalkers with more than 3 abilities, and this is alot of text to squeeze into a little area. Overall good job, but a bit too much.
7.5/10

Bucket of Grease was an awesome read. I really enjoyed this mechanic and the workings with it. I think you did a great job on this, and I also like the smelt mechanic addition. But what really won me was the flavor text.
8.5/10

Verduran Empath is interesting. I think that for 2 mana it's not overly broken, but incredibly playable. The enchantment aspect is very fitting. However, the additional land clause should also be only if you have less lands than an opponent. I think this could actually be printed with some minor tweaking. Great job.
8/10
24/30
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iplaneswalk
Bruce wayne is interesting. I like that you didn't choose his alter ego and stuck to the man behind the mask. I had to read this one several times to finally judge it. +1 seems somewhat fitting. Bribing with piles of cash. Gaining life for property is a return on investments. and -10 works as this is.. well, batman. I think the casting cost is a little high (in comparison, mind sculptor could be cast and ultimate before bruce at a lower cost. Also, black does not work with detain or gaining life without some 'cost' for that life. I think this is what hurts you the most, but I like the attempt.
6/10

Venser's helmet is a pretty simple equipment, but I think that the 'equip' cost is kinda poor. The only situation I think this works well is in a control deck, as creatures are very light and rarely attack. But it would be utilized in an aggro deck far better than a control deck. Nice and simple, but could of been better.
7/10

Endangered roc of paradise I felt was kinda poor. This doesn't really seem 'broken' or overly powerful. I would personally run birds of paradise over this 11/10 times. I think the tap effect could of been 2 mana of any color combination, 1/4 would of given much more survivability. The human clause was a nice touch though.
6/10
19/30
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ryan2754

Myrrah, Queen of Locusts is a nice legend. I wasn't personally familiar with this, but after reading the article I think you did a great job. My only complaint is she is easy to kill for a 6drop.
8/10

Titan Engine is neat. I love planeswalkers and would definitely play this in my superfriends deck. I think it could use some more tweaking, but am unsure as of right now and have spent enough time delaying these results so I can't offer more insight. Good job, and an entry I personally like. It would of scored higher if not for the tweaking.
7/10

Scroll Torcher is great, but I really wish I could use his ability at will instead of during my upkeep only. I think an activation cost of 3 would of been perfect, even if it didn't cause to tap.
7/10
22/30
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Coolcat3000
No means of offense, but I had a problem with this entry. As we already have a bruce wayne, I get the feeling that you wanted to also do a 'batman' entry. However, I don't think this is quite what you're original entry was in mind. I am familiar with owlman and the alternative universe in DC comics. But I think that this entry wasn't done so well. To start, he is black/blue, but his initial ability is a red ability. If you just gained control of the creature it would be blue, but the way it is worded it is definitely red. His second ability is definitely black, but the owlman is a tactician and would choose how to hurt you carefully, not just bluntly. This should of given you a choice of a non-land card, possibly with cmc<4 so as to not be to powerful but playable.
6/10

Statue of Augury
This is a fortification that could of easily been printed and seems to be very playable. It may be too powerful with the indestructible gain however. Nice entry, but a little much.
7/10

Scribe Goblin is easily my favorite of these entries. This is incredibly playable, and very combo-friendly. there is only one 'mistake', IMO. That is the 2 defense. Red very very rarely has a bigger toughness than power. I think that even a 2/2 would of been better as it would of been more fitting. Great job though.
9/10
23/10
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KGthelegend

Light yagami is an excellent entry. I read the wikipedia article and also really like your choice. I think you did a great job with this.
8.5/10

Harmonic Replicator is very neat. I like how we could have enchantment tokens, and not restricted to aura's/global/anything new. It also seems to be balanced in cost, equip, and activation.
9/10

Paragon of Light is a little much. I keep trying to decide if its too powerful or just right. And then I found it too powerful. I think that a key to wording that would of made this a higher score was the 'all creatures' clause. I think that 'humans and knights' OR 'all white creatures' you control would of been a perfect balance. Great entry though.
8/10
25.5/30
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jazaray

Sora! I was pleased to see this guy come around. Great entry, well balanced. I think the 0 ability could of also added +1/+1. nice entry.
8/10

Terraformer another fortification that could see play, but I think it's a little expensive. Also, the wording isn't quite correct. I'm not 100% what you wanted, but as it is the land becomes a basic land of any type and loses it's original type that does not end at EOT. This could cause ruling issues to appear. I like the flavor text though.
7/10

Bloodthirsty Cavalier is wayyy too powerful. I know I wanted powerful, but DAMN GURL! This thing is nuts. turn 2 in red burn or RDW and you're at 10 life? Nuts powerful. Far too easy to make a turn 3 win condition without any combo peices. Second to that, The 'half life' clause is more black than red, and should be rounded up. I like that you went all out, but this guy is too powerful.
6/10
21/30
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Junichi:

DON'T MAKE ME ANGRY! I love it! I think you did a great job with the incredible hulk and this is my personal favorite of the planeswalkers. Great entry.
9/10

Metallic adaptation Is very powerful, and I like that it's power artifact in colorless form. I think the initial casting cost is too low, however. at least 2, maybe 3. I would have to think more about it, but definitely not 1. Nice addition with the 'totem armor' clause for artifacts though.
7.5/10

Nevinyrral's reminiscence is WOW! I feel like Jazaray's entrance was too powerful, but this is as well. I really feel that there should of been a clause (x cannot be zero) in addition, as it destroys too much too easily as it is right now. all tokens and 0 drops for nothing? Brutal. Also, being 2 colorless mana I think should come with a downside. Possibly a cumulative upkeep or fading counters.
7/10
23.5/30
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ChargingRhinos

So I was left with a conundrum here. I like Urza personally, but I feel that he doesn't quite fit the requirment. He was neither in a cartoon, video game, or comic book. he is fictional and was in novels, so it's close, but not quite. Outside of that issue, He is a very fitting planeswalker. I think his Casting cost would of been better as UR3, but that's my opinion (blue for tinker, red for rage. the other two abilites fit colorless very well). So good entry, minor issue, but pointloss for not quite meeting criteria.
6/10

Voodoo Dust is great. ju-ju counters I got a chuckle reading this one. Took me a double-read to fully understand it at first. I like how you worded this carefully to keep it from being broken with 2 mana constantly. Great job.
8.5/10

keldon Blademaster is again, too powerful. I feel that some things also didn't fit. First is shroud. There is not a single mono-red creature in magic with shroud, and this doesn't fit the colorpie. It also makes him nigh-impossible to kill. Second, his 2/3. Why a big butt? It doesn't fit red well (it happens, but rarely.).
Next to that, I think the card would of been better balanced without shroud and as a 2/2 or 2/1 even. Also, I think R:+2/+0 should of been RR:+3/+0. It would of retained balance to force you into having 2 mana to pump instead of 1. As it can only be blocked by 2 creatures and has first strike/shroud, it would be incredibly difficult to kill as it is. +1 for flavor text and making me chuckle twice though (ju-ju counters and blademaster flavor)
6/10
20.5/30
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I hope I'm in the next round (too lazy to count now), if I am, could you let us in on your dislikes maybe per 'assignment' or is it for us to find out? If I'd known you didn't like 4 abilities on Planeswalkers, I'd try and squeeze He-Man in 3 abilities for instance.
Comparing fluffycow's Planeswalker to mine, mine has less text (almost half the text) but is only 0.5 point higher. Is that just because I give him 4 abilities?

Not pointing or anything, just wanted to know. Thanks, looking forward to the next challenge.

Edit: Ghostrider sucks. Bad. Part 2 is bad too. You're better off watching a good movie you've already seen.
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So we have to make some cuts! the top 8 advance to round 3. At the end of round 3, the highest 3 scores advance to the last round. All previous scores mean nothing! This round, the scores are for everything! On with the cuts:

Cuts:
AGO
Skizzikmonger
ryan2754

So this is a 6 card entry. the first 5 are the points. the last card is a multiplier for those points. Multipliers can be based on any number from 1.1 to 1.6. This can dramatically boost your score, so think very carefully about your entries!
Also: YOU MAY ONLY EDIT YOUR ENTRIES ONCE, AND NO REPOSTS! This is critically important to your entries. If a post has been edited more than once, it is no longer valid and 0 points are awarded. Wording on cards is being taken into important consideration, so make sure your card is doing EXACTLY what you want it to do! This is the nit-picky round, so everything is important. Grammar, mechanics, casting cost, everything. Forget your card subtype? That's gonna cost points. Misspelled creature as craeture? That's gonna cost points. I cannot stress this enough, so MAKE SURE YOU READ YOUR ENTRIES VERY CAREFULLY BEFORE SUBMITTING! With that being said, here are the qualifications for round 3.

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Cards 1 through 5:
I want a theme cycle. For example, the original 3 for 1 (dark ritual, lightning bolt, giant growth, healing salve, ancestral recall). The theme has to be consistent, fit the color pie(s) it falls under, and card types have to be shared. You can choose any theme you desire, any cardtype you desire, and color(s) you desire. You may choose an existing theme and continue it, or make a totally new one. Some things will grant more points than others (un-allied fastlands won't score very high, for instance). If any of this is unclear, please ask before posting and I will attempt to clarify further.
Card 6:
You signed on for MOTL, and you chose a username. That is your card. I want you to make me a card based around your username. It can be any card type, but it has to fit your username. You may add to your username (example: Gunslinga, Card guru), but your username has to be prevalent. Other than that you may not alter your username in ANY WAY (example: KGthelegend becoming "King God The legend"). This card is YOU and how you chose to reflect yourself on MOTL.

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The "smiths" cycle from Scars of Mirrodin. They all cost the same and have the same P/T. Each one has the same mechanic, except provide their own unique benefits.

Card 1
Myrsmith

W1 uncommon

Creature-Human Artificer

Whenever you cast an artifact spell, you may pay 1. If you do, put a 1/1 colorless Myr artifact creature token onto the battlefield.

2/1

xxxxxx

card2
Riddlesmith

U1 uncommon

Creature-Human Artificer

Whenever you cast an artifact spell, you may draw a card. If you do, discard a card.

2/1

xxxxxx

card3
Painsmith

B1 uncommon

Creature-Human Artificer

Whenever you cast an artifact spell, you may have target creature get +2/0 and gain deathtouch until end of turn.

2/1

xxxxx

card4
Embersmith

R1 uncommon

Creature-Human Artificer

Whenever you cast an artifact spell, you may pay 1. If you do, Embersmith deals 1 damage to target creature or player.

2/1

xxxxxx

Lifesmith

G1 uncommon

Creature-Human Artificer

Whenever you cast an artifact spell, you may pay 1. If you do, you gain 3 life.

xxxxxx

Card 6
iPLANESWALK, the artistic participant

Legendary Creature

iPLANESWALK is indistructible, vigilant, and gains value every day

iPLANESWALK's toughness is equal to the number of followers he has on tumblr.

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However, I have got one question on our multiplier:

quote:

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Originally posted by B14ckM4g3:
ROUND 3:Card 6:
You signed on for MOTL, and you chose a username. That is your card. I want you to make me a card based around your username. It can be any card type, but it has to fit your username. You may add to your username (example: Gunslinga, Card guru), but your username has to be prevalent. Other than that you may not alter your username in ANY WAY (example: KGthelegend becoming "King God The legend"). This card is YOU and how you chose to reflect yourself on MOTL.

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My username IS a card. What do I do now? Just use the cardname but reinvent another card with it?

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quote:

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Originally posted by B14ckM4g3:
@ryan2754: While I would normally appreciate such input, in this round I ask that you and anyone else refrain from assisting any members.

@iPLANESWALK: If you do not understand the criteria, please ask me to clarify.

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Fair enough. Just thought it seemed weird he just copied the SoM cycle.

As such, really wish I would have moved on. My first round just was subpar.